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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:18 pm
by Alicorn
No, she was not in the mood.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:22 pm
by Lambda
In that case perhaps the post might be edited to avoid the word "squirm", that word having previously been mostly used in the context of Mysterious Feelings.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:33 pm
by Anya
Haha. I have no idea how I missed that. "Singleplayer Related Activities." Heh. I like that wording.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:34 pm
by Kappa
She's thinking over her Mysterious Feelings in the post, though, so surely the word directly relates...?

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:36 pm
by Lambda
But after her internal monologue became opaque to the narration, she was squirming in her blankets while not falling asleep. That's a bit more specific.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:38 pm
by Kappa
Oh, hmm. I don't think I interpreted that the same way you did, or I would've recalled it more clearly.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:02 pm
by Lambda
The exact words are "She squirms under the covers.", plus context.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:26 pm
by Kappa
Aha. Yeah, I think that read to me as a verb of motion indicating the manner in which she entered the beneath-covers area.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:50 pm
by Alicorn
Kappa's reading is the intended one.

Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

PostPosted: Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:18 pm
by Lambda
I belatedly note that the phrase "the hair song" amuses me.