There should be an Effulgence thread

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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Alicorn » Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:18 pm

No, she was not in the mood.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Lambda » Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:22 pm

In that case perhaps the post might be edited to avoid the word "squirm", that word having previously been mostly used in the context of Mysterious Feelings.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Anya » Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:33 pm

Haha. I have no idea how I missed that. "Singleplayer Related Activities." Heh. I like that wording.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Kappa » Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:34 pm

She's thinking over her Mysterious Feelings in the post, though, so surely the word directly relates...?
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Lambda » Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:36 pm

But after her internal monologue became opaque to the narration, she was squirming in her blankets while not falling asleep. That's a bit more specific.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Kappa » Sat Jun 14, 2014 4:38 pm

Oh, hmm. I don't think I interpreted that the same way you did, or I would've recalled it more clearly.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Lambda » Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:02 pm

The exact words are "She squirms under the covers.", plus context.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Kappa » Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:26 pm

Aha. Yeah, I think that read to me as a verb of motion indicating the manner in which she entered the beneath-covers area.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Alicorn » Sat Jun 14, 2014 5:50 pm

Kappa's reading is the intended one.
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Re: There should be an Effulgence thread

Postby Lambda » Sat Jun 14, 2014 11:18 pm

I belatedly note that the phrase "the hair song" amuses me.
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