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Short Story: "Sendaway"

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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Alicorn » Thu Apr 16, 2015 6:40 pm

Charlie fits Deathsbaning all right, but I think I'd actually make it Renée, because Charlie's the kind of person who would marry a Deathsbane. (A Renée might want to join them of her own volition but that isn't how they work.) Character attractors don't apply nearly as firmly when there's a magic sword.

I'll fix the tag. It was a copy-paste error.
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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Bluelantern » Thu Apr 16, 2015 6:57 pm

Sorry for my bad english

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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Alicorn » Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:02 pm

I mean, for plot reasons I might make Charlie the Deathsbane parent just so I could make Renée the wizard. Charlies are not typically wizards, Renées would take to it better.
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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Bluelantern » Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:09 pm

Sorry for my bad english

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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Tamien » Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:24 pm

I was assuming that instead of running away, the non-Deathsbane parent would have granted the Bell opacity just in time before the knighting, and then *stayed*, rather than attempting the kidnapping, and then no one noticed that the Bell was not a Deathsbane until the Bell grew up and like, was conspicuously Bellish instead of Deathsbaney. So I am curious what course of action would actually happen!
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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Bluelantern » Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:29 pm

Sorry for my bad english

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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Tamien » Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:41 pm

I think it's more Charlie of a plan, I think. I'm not sure how well he would actually *manage* it. I think probably Renee would just kidnap and run if she could. She's less rooted down.
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Re: Short Story: "Sendaway"

Postby Bluelantern » Thu Apr 16, 2015 7:45 pm

Sorry for my bad english

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